

My wife, Eunice, was a keen observer of nature. When we went to the beach, she would examine the effects of the tides on the creatures left behind by outgoing tide. She carried binoculars to watch and record the different types of birds which would feed at the many feeding stations she would have in different areas of the yard. She watched the progress of the many trees and plants I put in the ground. She would watch for visitors, white-tailed deer, raccoons, skunks, squirrels, chipmunks and many others who would come to eat and live on our property Eunice would observe how the changes in season affected everything.
When something happened she would write wonderfully descriptive poems using nature as metaphors for what she felt. In a way, I guess I was an observer of Eunice. One day she took me to an overlook to watch Bald Eagles who were nesting and fishing in the river below. That's another story.
Eunice was brought up by her grandmother who lived with us. When her grandma died Eunice wrote many poems about how she felt. The following work is the way Eunice combined both nature and her grandma. I hope you'll enjoy it.
ANCIENT TREE
Ancient tree, aged bones cracked and bent
Branches that twist and grope, reach out,
Beckon me...
I come closer and the ground rumbles from
Beneath, with roots like wooden snakes, which
Fold and then unfold, in grotesque design,
Like pythons ready to strike, they guard their
Treasure, their sacred tree...
I touch its pitted skin, and
Whisper, who put you here years before,
Tell me all you know...
Silent is this remnant from the past,
No brain, no voice, dead...
Suddenly, it looms its head into the air
Arms and legs, thrashing, bombard me
From above,
And on the ground,
Shadows flashing, Black and white,
Attack me in the wind...
I stand motionless,
A prisoner of nature's war...
The wind slows and rocks the shadows
To sleep,
The tree nods lazily,
It knows the secrets of the past...
And lets me go.
By Eunice Verdi.
gentle one Frank, bravo
ReplyDeleteThanks, buddy. She had a very gentle soul. A real lady. I'm sorry you didn't get to know her.
ReplyDeleteA powerful poem with brilliant imagery. I like this one very much, Frank.
ReplyDeleteJeannine,
ReplyDeleteyou are so right. Very powerful and brilliant imagery. The tree is her grandmother and her grandmother is the tree. I was with Eunice in the hospital on her grandmothers last day. When we left her grandmother, who was in a very weakened condition, put her arms around Eunice and held her very tightly with a strength she shouldn'd have been capable of.
She knew she wouldn't see Eunice anymore so she used every ounce of whatever she had left to say goodbye. Eunice and I both knew that this was her final goodbye. There was such a love between the two of them the likes of which is rarely seen.
Eunice wrote another poem just about that moment. You are very perceptive to see the power in it.
Greg is so lucky to have you as his wife.